The rewording was intended to focus attention on a pronoun as distinct from a title.
Over to B67.
Careful analysis of this clue will reveal two stations on the same line:
The clue has been clarified:
"Indiscriminate discharge by distant neighbour could destroy a habitat, or even a creature similarly denoted".
The name of the neighbour could describe either his surname, or his favourite recreational pursuit.
Not Kilmore or Axedale